Hey, Zetork's Brother's name is Kriv and the female dragonborn is Surina, but I guess you knew that if you read the comic.  These are suggested names from the Player's Handbook, but it's not like any gamers will actually use these names.

Lots of detail on this page, especially in the second panel.  I don't think the proportions are quite right, but this is an odd angle to draw anyone in.

Speaking of odd angles, check out the tilted camera in panel 5.  That's a really distorted view with Taddin in the background suspended behind Mealstrom while Kriv struggles to get a hold of her.

Like the starts in Arlina's eyes? No?  Well, I wanted to show that she's enamored by "Zetork's" prowess. Do you know a better way to do that?  Sometimes the simplist ways are the best.